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ETERNITY
Contributed by
chrisdavid
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Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 11:46:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Yesterday it came to an end
Like I thought it would
I hold back the tears
In the best way that I could
All our hopes
And all our dreams
And all those memories
Are still here
During troubled times
When everything went wrong
You stood up to be counted
You believed and you were strong
The past no longer holds fear
The future is near
I will wait forever
I will still be here
I hope one day you'll come back
And we'll share the rest of our years
Together we will do things we never dared to try
Together we have a love that will never die
Even though you're now gone
I'll try and stay strong
I still believe in destiny
And I'll wait here for eternity
Copyright ©
chrisdavid
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2010-03-30 23:46:19]
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Re: ETERNITY
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by thistle_and_fern on
Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 12:11:24 AM AEST
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I dont think anything I could say would say it like this poem does.
Straight from the heart.
Yes, we try to stay strong even when things do turn to custard.
Well done. When you can relate in someway to a poem, it speaks volumnes. I can relate. |
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Re: ETERNITY
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by Fuzzy on
Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 03:19:21 AM AEST
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Very emotional write, and very well written
you write very well.
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: ETERNITY
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 08:04:50 AM AEST
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Wow, the melancholy in this is wrenching. But the steadfastness of the one who waits is beautiful. It speaks to not only the will but the character of that person. If only more were that dedicated and strong. This was inspiring. Truly inspiring. Even amidst the sadness. Thank you for sharing it.
Seléne ~
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Re: ETERNITY
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by canyouhearme on
Tuesday, 6th April 2010 @ 01:42:09 PM AEST
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What a very touching poem, chrisdavid.
I think many people could relate to the feelings you've written about.
Stay strong. |
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