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Little Star
Contributed by
Fuzzy
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Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 12:26:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Twinkle, little star what secrets do you hold
any for me, tell me your Dreams, do you cry
Tears, as you shine, remember , your birth as
you look down on this earth, Take me with
you, show me the universe, so far away
night sky you lay, Wish, i could catch you
hold you close, could you give me what
i need the most, Hold you in the palm of
my hand, Tell me your secrets, Tell me
you understand, Twinkle little Star, be
mine tonight, Love can shine so bright
as, i lay within, your body, be my love
Tonight
Give me My Angel,Star let her see
Shine little Star,give her back to me
Tell me your secrets,share this Tear
Star, so far away, But Heart so near
Copyright ©
Fuzzy
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2010-03-30 12:26:20]
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Re: Little Star
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 12:42:00 PM AEST
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Wow this is beautiful. It gives me warm and fuzzy all over.
Very tender and touching write.
big huggs, fuzzys, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Little Star
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by Inchiostro on
Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 09:18:02 PM AEST
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Really good flow Fuzzy, and really good imagery.
i like the tone a lot too, good write keep it up.
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Re: Little Star
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by thistle_and_fern on
Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 12:21:14 AM AEST
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Fuzzy, youve done it again. Put my attempts to shame. Well written.
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