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Michael
Contributed by
veronicablue
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Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 11:33:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Swimming against the currents in your vortex of love..
I can't catch my breath, i feel i'm coming to conclusion..
Rifts in life which tore us apart will forever remain…
harmonies in life will always introduce us,
yet we dance a different dance, a dance of the macabre and masochistic.
Find me again, you can smell my scent, i can feel your breathe
Our chemistry is exploding on stage, but wait.. someone turned out the lights..
Where are you my love? Here we go again.
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Re: Michael
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by Fuzzy on
Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 12:48:11 PM AEST
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Can i feel this,oh Boy "yes" very well written
Take care
Fuzzy
Find me again, you can smell my scent, i can feel your breathe
Our chemistry is exploding on stage, but wait.. someone turned out the lights..
Where are you my love? Here we go again. |
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Re: Michael
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 11:56:05 AM AEST
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There is a hypnotic feeling in your words that carries enchantment throughout the entire write. Wonderful descriptions that vibrate from line to line. well written
take care
duff |
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