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To Need
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
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Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 12:32:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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To say I hate him would be lying,
Even if he stole my glimmer of hope
Bringing winter frost in his wake----
Forever contorting thoughts of happiness.
No, I do not despise him.
The simple fact is I love to love him;
I need to need him lingering on my bones.
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JakerBaker88
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Re: To Need
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 12:49:41 AM AEST
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good work.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: To Need
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by Fuzzy on
Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 05:08:43 AM AEST
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very well written,very nice write.
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: To Need
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 05:52:58 AM AEST
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JB, this is timeless. And that last line is pure poetry. In these few short lines you've captured the essence of what is it like to be held in an emotion that will not relent. I know of this. And you've captured it oh so well. Excellent post!
Seléne ~
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Re: To Need
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by Inchiostro on
Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 10:17:17 AM AEST
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| Lovely Jacky forgets to mention that she used MY words. :P And i don't think this poem really applies anymore you sad panda. :) |
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Re: To Need
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 11:41:46 AM AEST
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A short write but one that leaves it all on the table without questions lingering. I enjoyed how you have said everything you need to in such few lines. A write packed with a fist. well written
take care
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