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tears
Contributed by
boo-boo
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Monday, 29th March 2010 @ 08:02:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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tears when people die
tears when reading sad things
tears when you get dumped
tears when you have to leave your friends
tears when hurting yourself
tears when your dad hurts your mom
tears at the grave yard
tears you get used
tears when you slip and fall
tears when you cut yourself
tears when your friends cry
tears for know reason
now stop crying
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Re: tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by northernlights on
Monday, 29th March 2010 @ 11:27:31 PM AEST (User
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I like this,sometimes you have to have a point where your brain with logic has to stem the emotion. |
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Re: tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by chrisdavid on
Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 12:12:05 AM AEST (User
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It makes a lot of sense. We seem to cry at just about anything, is life really that bad?!!
Good write.
Chris. |
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Re: tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 01:19:45 PM AEST (User
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tears r a sign of emotion
but sometimes we cry
for the wrong reasons.
i like the ending,
there's gonna be a day
when the crying will end.
i enjoyed this
take care
-K.Z. |
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