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Elysian Fields
Contributed by
ramfire
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Monday, 29th March 2010 @ 10:05:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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Will you now place your sweet hand close in mine
and we’ll walk fair Elysian fields of peace.
Together we’ll talk knowing we won’t pine
earth’s scene where constant strain has no surcease.
The flowers show a majestic array
of colors bright more so than eyes can view.
With little white bench saying we can stay
awhile before our stroll begins anew.
This music you hear comes from morning lights
that play harmonic’s great ebullient score.
Its range exceeds the diatonic heights
and we can go to place where angels soar.
Dear, place your faith in Jesus Christ this day
and see the garden made for you to stay.
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Re: Elysian Fields
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by northernlights on
Monday, 29th March 2010 @ 11:37:40 AM AEST
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| Beautiful spiritual write,soft tone,being guided,lovely descriptive words, and with my love of Greece where better to find peace. |
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Re: Elysian Fields
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by Loende on
Monday, 29th March 2010 @ 04:10:15 PM AEST
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A truly lovely and comforting write. May God
bless and keep you.
Be well,
Loende |
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Re: Elysian Fields
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th March 2010 @ 05:35:36 PM AEST
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Written with a gesture of beautiful faith your words entice the reader with gentle hope. This stirs the soul looking into tomorrow's eyes knowing faith cannot be harmed. Well written
take care
duff |
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Re: Elysian Fields
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 01:28:00 PM AEST
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inspiring... we all hope for that promised paradise
take care
-K.Z. |
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