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Mumbling My Words
Contributed by
mexy
on
Sunday, 28th March 2010 @ 09:50:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Shyly swirling, twirling my body,
Awkwardly gliding, sliding my feet,
Dancing through the curves and turns,
That reside inside my head,
my mind
searching, it's lurking,
But I've lost it.
Clumsily stumbling, mumbling my words,
Sincerley blushing, rushing my pace,
Smiling across the waves and wakes,
From ducks on sunset water,
my eyes
reflecting, they smile,
And I shine.
Copyright ©
mexy
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2010-03-28 21:50:34]
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Re: Mumbling My Words
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th March 2010 @ 11:05:10 PM AEST
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I am not too good at thinking of titles myself so got no suggestions but you got a nice flow thing goin' on and I didn't stumble on the words like I do a lot when I read poems. Very nicely done
Thank you for an enjoyable read and  to YPDC.
Tim
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Re: Mumbling My Words
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by Spike on
Thursday, 1st April 2010 @ 05:42:17 AM AEST
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as good as the first time - title is great, so don't change it or a word of this hip poetry bliss.
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