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Above the clouds
Contributed by
funmi
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Sunday, 28th March 2010 @ 10:50:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The stars are fading,
Tearing because i can't face it
my heart is racing,
as i run for hope,
hope not to believe this day.
I knew Grandpa as a neat,
caring and hardworking man.
He loved plant, he taught me
how to care for them.
He cared about my future,
he loved and feared God.
I wanted him to see me live the
future we always talked about.
I cant put my feelings into a poem,
but inbetwee the lines ae hidden rhymes
searching for air running from fear.
Its hard when you lose someone you love,
its hard to understand.
But i will let my heart heal,
for i know its God will that
Grandpa rest in the heavens
above the clouds.
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funmi
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2010-03-28 10:50:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Above the clouds
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th March 2010 @ 11:12:38 AM AEST (User
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Very sad poem, for me, it's very touching,
My Granda passed away almost 4months ago,
He was the kindest and most bravest man I've ever met. We were very close before he passed away.. closer than he was with his own daughter...
It took time, but you finally realize he's in a better place |
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