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My Sky
Contributed by
DrcGaimer
on
Saturday, 27th March 2010 @ 02:18:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You can be my sky,
the atmosphere of my life.
Generate the orbit which turns my world around.
Supply the gravity which keeps me a ground.
Be that which contains the very air I breathe.
The beautiful and peaceful view which sets my mind at ease.
You can be my sky.
Your smile, as warm as the sun upon my face.
Your voice, the gentle breeze which propels this vessel towards an exultant place.
Provide the raindrops which inudate all my doubts,
and the torrent that spurs them out.
You can be my sky.
Coloring my world the perfect shade of blue.
Somewhere between heaven and earth,
best describes you.
Copyright ©
DrcGaimer
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2010-03-27 14:18:04]
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Re: My Sky
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 27th March 2010 @ 02:40:42 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write,expressing the peace and contentment of love, the warmth and the security,the very air I breathe, you are blessed if you have this in this world. |
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Re: My Sky
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th March 2010 @ 05:13:23 PM AEST
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A wonderful romantic depiction of the that entagles our hearts and renders us defenseless to whomever it is that stirred those thoughts in the first place. Beautifully written.
Seléne ~ |
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Re: My Sky
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th March 2010 @ 09:15:00 AM AEST
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Words that soar to the very subject chosen this is a beautiful write. Light and delicate to read this is refreshing like the air we breathe.
well written
take care
duff |
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Re: My Sky
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by duff on
Sunday, 24th October 2010 @ 07:36:01 PM AEST
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What an intricate and delicate piece of writing. Each line carefully balanced showing warmth and compassion. I enjoyed the use of colors and imagery as well.
take care
duff |
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Re: My Sky
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by Lyre on
Friday, 29th October 2010 @ 06:42:21 PM AEST
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| Good poem! |
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