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Silver Screen
Contributed by
Fuzzy
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Saturday, 27th March 2010 @ 02:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Now,finally i see,all that's lost,could have been
plays,in my mind,just like a film,that has no end
My seat,the front row,no exit sign, can be seen
play my part so well,no need for me to pretend
See my future,and the past,on this silver screen
No popcorn,just food for thought,feeds my mind
Now, no longer a Star, my role, just a has -been
As it comes to the end, again starts to rewind
The credits,scroll down,then film starts again
Copyright ©
Fuzzy
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2010-03-27 14:15:00]
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Re: Silver Screen
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 27th March 2010 @ 02:28:08 PM AEST
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| Great description, the same film keeps playing can almost hear the projector,and the feelings of futility as life has put you in a role that feels like it has little worth, well written my friend |
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Re: Silver Screen
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by DrcGaimer on
Saturday, 27th March 2010 @ 03:03:30 PM AEST
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| Good. Really liked the line, no popcorn just food for thought. |
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Re: Silver Screen
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th March 2010 @ 05:17:21 PM AEST
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The silver screen is such a great metaphor for life. And yet, when the end arrives, as you stated in your last line, it just repeats. When do we actually learn not to repeat? *sigh* This was very provocative, paul. It made for a wonderful read.
Seléne ~ |
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Re: Silver Screen
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th March 2010 @ 05:41:52 PM AEST
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So much depth to speak of
strange and intricate is life
a interesting concept you've taken on
humbling,and nobel,for we are so self important as people
and what is it we hold so dear?
is it really what's imparitive in this play of life
while not trivializing our existance,the perspective taken is clever
nicely conveyed
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Re: Silver Screen
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by Alexa_Bachtel on
Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 04:02:16 AM AEST
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You got me speechless, Paul. It's amazing. Only some lines, but a state of mind has been shown improbably well. I think, it's one of your best poems.
Keep it going, my friend.
Alexa.
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