|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Frayed Ribbon
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Friday, 26th March 2010 @ 07:32:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
|
The pink ribbon frays;
slowly dwindling away,
innocence is stained
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2010-03-26 19:32:38]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Frayed Ribbon
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 27th March 2010 @ 02:44:15 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
enjoyed this Haiku
nice write
Fuzzy |
|
|
Re: Frayed Ribbon
(User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on
Saturday, 27th March 2010 @ 03:05:53 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Powerful write love the imagery |
|
|
Re: Frayed Ribbon
(User Rating: 1 )
by Xnoybis on
Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 04:12:37 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| It's like a short burst metaphor for most people's lives. I love it. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
