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Cedo Nulli*
Contributed by
ming
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Friday, 26th March 2010 @ 11:45:34 AM in AEST
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crazy dribs and drabs
loose pattern
buried beneath time
smothered in memories
oldest thing ever...
forever
shadows sinking deep
grey skies rolling
slaty and dark
shifts on its axis
the wind finds
its own way.
* I yield to none.
Copyright ©
ming
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2010-03-26 11:45:34]
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Re: Cedo Nulli*
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th March 2010 @ 12:48:07 PM AEST
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power ful and some how beautiful
beyond words,the vision of shadows and grey sky's
creepy,surreal and intriguing
this passage was as confident as the last line,
nicely written as always
-D.Truth |
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Re: Cedo Nulli*
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by spud on
Thursday, 1st April 2010 @ 03:18:37 PM AEST
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Hi Ming,
Nice one.
''Oldest thing ever .... forever''
Love that line!
Stay strong, and Cedo Nulli!!
Tommy
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