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sweet melody
Contributed by
longhaircg
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Friday, 26th March 2010 @ 11:18:18 AM in AEST
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The air is clearing, I am hearing,
words to a differant song.
way up high then down low, ah a little vibrato.
singing these words, setting me free,
feeling whats inside of me.
not someone else, this is to be felt deep inside self,
where the soul lies, there are no ties, to hold me down,
sweet melody, song of life, breathing in and out.
without a doubt, I am hearing me,
sweet melody setting me free.
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Re: sweet melody
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by thistle_and_fern on
Friday, 26th March 2010 @ 12:22:39 PM AEST
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Enjoyed this, sometimes we forget to "listen" to ourselves.
"sweet melody setting me free". |
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Re: sweet melody
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 27th March 2010 @ 02:49:46 AM AEST
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Liked this, enjoyed the read
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: sweet melody
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th March 2010 @ 06:18:46 AM AEST
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Almost like a hypnotic meditation, this piece makes the reader more aware of their own breathing in and out. Beautiful word choices make this such a pleasure to read. And it flows as effortlessly as a river on a beautiful summer day. Gorgeous post!
Seléne ~
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Re: sweet melody
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 05:26:30 PM AEST
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flows in and out and all around, beautifully hypnotic,
hugs n' love nessa |
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