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love text
Contributed by
dirk-velvet
on
Thursday, 25th March 2010 @ 06:49:42 AM in AEST
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oops
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LOVE TEXT
we were formed
via emails
sent back & forth
for seven days.
each day revealing
a little bit more
of our
past
present
future.
by the end of the week
we had
each others' secrets.
secrets our former spouses
never had.
we did not write to each other
the next day
or
the day after that.
we never wrote to each other again.
Copyright ©
dirk-velvet
... [
2010-03-25 06:49:42]
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Re: love text
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th March 2010 @ 07:13:35 AM AEST
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well, this is kinda sad. Imagine the exploration of secrets only to never share another word! And yet, how perfect is it that two people can share an extraordinary 7 days and just hold onto that forever? Their emotions will be perfect forever. An interesting write, dirk. Happy to be reading you.
Seléne ~
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Re: love text
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by shani21shani on
Thursday, 25th March 2010 @ 07:27:42 AM AEST
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Well it has a funny but sad ending.. and a lil humor in between .. good one .. i like it ..
Why didnt you write to each other..
As they say "your best friend is a lot more dangerous than your worst enemy" |
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