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A Friend or Foe?
Contributed by
MyInspiration
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Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 03:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Are you my friend or foe? Do you wish my demise?
Strike me with another blow.
But this one was personal, absolute humiliation.
How could you do it? How could you stoop to this low?
Bitter remorse and broken hearts fill my mind, but is it all just in my head?
My thoughts pass the time as these virgin tears stain these lines, wishing I were dead.
These lines are you for you, you and you alone.
My very existence, starring at a dying phone.
No one to reach out to,becasue all that I once trusted was lost.
Lost in the disrespect that was shown.
Are you my friend of foe? Absolute humiliation has become all I know.
Leave me; kill me with your remorseful tone.
A tone of forgiveness wants to be released, but my heart feels violated.
I want my pain to cease, but I remain quiet. Are you my friend of foe?
When all seems lost you are the one I care for the most, but why did you go to such ends?
Don’t ever humiliate me like that ever again, or I don’t see how we can be friends.
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Re: A Friend or Foe?
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 03:49:03 PM AEST
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very good...i love the line:
'my thoughts pass the time as these virgin tears stain these lines, wishing i were dead.'
very good... |
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Re: A Friend or Foe?
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by full_blur on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 04:40:28 PM AEST
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'A tone of forgiveness wants to be released'
I really like this line. Very powerful vivd descriptions. Damn, what happened at that party? |
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Re: A Friend or Foe?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 05:19:41 PM AEST
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Great write..hope things got sorted out...
Jenni |
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