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Silicon is not beauty
Contributed by
Cancer
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Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 02:45:00 PM in AEST
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anorexia, here to stay
watch my pretty doll decay
watch as your waist wastes away
no tomorrow, dead today
your nose too big, it spites your face
but sleeping pills will help erase
this life lived, lonely, in disgrace
vanity once again lays waste
your breasts too small, so you go see
a doctor with no Ph.D
he butchers you, but not for free
SILICON IS NOT BEAUTY
your hair too ratty, your eyes too small
you're so uncomfortable inside your own skin
but you should lighten up
for, though it is cliched,
true beauty comes from within
so cancel the ***** liposuction
put your make-up bag back on the shelf
stop obsessing, go out, have fun
and just be your ***** self
Copyright ©
Cancer
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2003-04-12 14:45:00]
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Re: Silicon is not beauty
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by full_blur on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 03:10:37 PM AEST
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"waist wastes"
nice play on words. The first stanza is very strong in this poem. You paint a great picture thoughout the poem of the decaying doll. Good work. |
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Re: Silicon is not beauty
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by shelby on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 05:41:42 PM AEST
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Wow this is great. Wonderful twist of words. Makes a person think. You are very right. It would be wonderful if all of us could be happy with ourselves the way we are!! Thanks
Michelle |
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Re: Silicon is not beauty
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by LadyDama on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 09:29:57 AM AEST
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| i love this poem... this is truly art... blessings... |
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Re: Silicon is not beauty
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by springchic1979 on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 10:35:29 PM AEST
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I love the message...it was strong, clear, and to the point. Wonderfully put.
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Re: Silicon is not beauty
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 08:40:56 PM AEST
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| for many of us the beauty was stolen and the only way to have control of ourselves again....well somtimes it destroys us.......i'm sorry you had to see her go through that....... |
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