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- Your Face -
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Sunday, 21st March 2010 @ 11:44:43 AM in AEST
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The side of your face smiles
As I peek away,
I love staring at you
I hope that’s ok...
I don’t want your attention
Nor for you to catch me,
I just love what I see
It’s really kind of catchy...
The one that I really love
As you pull me in so close,
I smell the perfume you’re wearing
It’s what I love the most...
The side of your face smiles
As you turn the other cheek,
Your laughing, smiling,
It’s really kind of unique...
I’m glad that I chose you
And forever Ill be your man,
I simply enjoy our passion
Now smile for me again
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Re: - Your Face -
(User Rating: 1 )
by spud on
Monday, 22nd March 2010 @ 03:23:38 PM AEST
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Hi,
This is a happy little poem about the simple things
that warm us to another.
What's in a smile, eh? ................ the galaxies!!
Tommy
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Re: - Your Face -
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 22nd March 2010 @ 03:43:30 PM AEST
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Soooo nice!
What a lovely little treat to stumble across!
The side of your face smiles
As you turn the other cheek,
Your laughing, smiling,
It’s really kind of unique...
I simply adored this verse, you are so romantic! It reminds me of so much that I don't know where to begin!
Really, really lovely poppet x
Star x x x |
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Re: - Your Face -
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd March 2010 @ 08:35:25 PM AEST
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Oh, what a delightful and precious thing of beauty this truly is. Gloriously written with just the right amount of affection and detail. I adore the last stanza, especially that last line. How exceptional! I agree with Tommy too....galaxies ARE found in a smile. And how wonderful is that?? :D
Seléne ~
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Re: - Your Face -
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 26th April 2014 @ 09:53:16 PM AEST
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beautifully written, so loving and romantic, and the last line sooo sweet,
hugs n' love nessa |
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