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Boxed In
Contributed by
Amelia
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Sunday, 21st March 2010 @ 05:42:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A star, I wish to be.
Far from this sadist world.
Away from hands that grip.
That tear me up and scold.
A closet my best friend
The sanctuary from the dread.
Endless imprisonment;
I would end it if I dared
Footsteps approach my box,
My brain spins round in fear.
A heavy breath surrounds
It’s him. I know. Now tears
Copyright ©
Amelia
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2010-03-21 05:42:17]
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Re: Boxed In
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on
Sunday, 21st March 2010 @ 08:46:18 AM AEST
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This gave me the chills a bit
very well written, on a difficult
subject.
Take care
Fuzzy
A closet my best friend
The sanctuary from the dread.
Endless imprisonment;
I would end it if I dared
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Re: Boxed In
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by spud on
Monday, 22nd March 2010 @ 03:38:42 PM AEST
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Hi,
Very sad, very tragic, and an insight into the mind
of an innocent facing evil.
God love them all.
Tommy
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