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If
Contributed by
essential
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Saturday, 20th March 2010 @ 06:50:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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If the sky was red not blue
Would I instead of me be you?
Would I no longer think but act
And your love I would attract
Would simply all my dreams come true?
But I am all alone instead
Just with questions in my head
And still to speak I am too shy
And still I can't avoid to cry
And still the sky is blue not red.
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2010-03-20 18:50:59]
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Re: If
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by musicrox13 on
Saturday, 20th March 2010 @ 10:48:11 PM AEST
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i love thispoem, your such a good poet keep writing(:
-melly |
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Re: If
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by JustShifter on
Sunday, 21st March 2010 @ 12:58:03 AM AEST
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yes i know exactly where you are coming from with that poem, i just cant put it into words like you do - good work !
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Re: If
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by Fuzzy on
Sunday, 21st March 2010 @ 01:07:01 AM AEST
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very nice write, well written.
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: If
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by purplestary on
Monday, 22nd March 2010 @ 11:58:29 PM AEST
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wow. i love this poem. if i could just change this, would it change this, and make that work? but in the end...nothing changes..."and still the sky is blue, not red."....
you are a very talented poet. |
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