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Tear Drops
Contributed by
lilch4ever
on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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T: torn.
E: excruciating pain.
A: alone.
R: relatively angry.
D: drowning in your own fear.
R: rarely equipped to handle.
O: ordinarily distained.
P: penned against a wall.
S: showered with sadness.
A sudden urge to let them fall.
The fear of how much they will fall.
The desire to blink back those tears.
The desire to not have those fears.
A form of happiness and a sense of peace.
A form of tragedy and grief.
Tear drops are signs of relief.
Written By: Charlene
Written: 2003.
Copyright ©
lilch4ever
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2003-04-12 13:05:00]
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Re: Tear Drops
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by full_blur on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 04:45:31 PM AEST
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Cool formatting, really good idea. Sometimes I feel this way myself.
'relatively angry' is a great description. |
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Re: Tear Drops
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by shelby on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 05:54:32 PM AEST
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this is great
michelle |
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Re: Tear Drops
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by Sk8er909 on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 06:01:39 PM AEST
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| Very good write |
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