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Meditation on Rehling's Morality

Contributed by scooterhyme on Saturday, 20th March 2010 @ 03:51:02 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

A storm rolls in over the lake
I'm sitting on a roof thinking about what i should leave
and what i should take
In my room there's a picture of Jesus and his crown of thorns
This damn humidity has faded the picture
Over an abandoned kingdom he mourns
When was contemplation last a fixture
Who has sacrificed for faith, even if in vein

I climb in the window and it starts to rain

No one claims to know the circumstance
yet in secret we all make plans
a crippling shame of a holy lance
the drunken tattoo of sacred lands
Secular and Uncertain
an escalation using moral fame
I hear a preacher call my name
"a fifty percent tax on human achievement"
"will keep you from being called or caught out"
"and in the righteous battlement"
"Side effects include not understanding what freedoms about"
"they must feel the pain to never be caught out"

I watch the driving rain
Jesus said something
but his picture was faded in its frame

Copyright © scooterhyme ... [ 2010-03-20 15:51:02]
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Re: Meditation on Rehling's Morality (User Rating: 1 )
by MsJoans on Tuesday, 23rd March 2010 @ 07:37:20 AM AEST
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Wow, very powerful. It reminds me of what Mohandas Ghandi once said. "I like your Christ, I do not like your Christians. Your Christians are so unlike your Christ..."

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