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Inception of the Befallen
Contributed by
Auston
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Friday, 19th March 2010 @ 05:33:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Forever lost in the brink of edging madness
Only to be brought upon by sorrow and sadness.
Why do these things happen you ask?
For manifestation is but a paltry task.
Understanding is only half of the faulty war,
But I wish to know the other half that I need implore.
Unless the answer is brought upon by one's own mind,
It will be impossible to breach the reliquaries maligned.
Forever lost in the clustered darkness of insanity,
All we really do is just replace the thoughts randomly.
Pain burdening the mind instead of the head
That screams of insanity where only madness treads.
Corruption extorts the mind to the pinnacle of infinite terror.
Human will is powerless unless heralded by the bearer.
Why is the mind so fragile, even to its own ambition?
If it was meant to hold such prowess, only dying of fallen volition.
Unfathomable and untraceable thoughts
Riddle the mind with superlative shocks.
Memories that were nay seen before
Return and retreat forever more.
Copyright ©
Auston
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2010-03-19 17:33:57]
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Re: Inception of the Befallen
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th March 2010 @ 06:31:57 PM AEST
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An imagination dipped in pure darkness this is a great write, The imagery is brewing with sheer poetic madness leaving me to picture such haunting thoughts. I can always appreciate the dark side of things and this was a joy to read.
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Re: Inception of the Befallen
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by northernlights on
Friday, 19th March 2010 @ 11:54:13 PM AEST
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| Driven to madness by sorrow, a truly dark journey,a fight for control where we may have a lot less than we would like to admit.....Human will is powerless unless heralded by the bearer....a constant tide of memories, why is the mind so fragile.Powerfully written and very expressive. |
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