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Breathless
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Friday, 19th March 2010 @ 03:53:55 AM in AEST
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No time to breathe life,
too busy to inhale air,
living on stale breaths
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2010-03-19 03:53:55]
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Re: Breathless
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 19th March 2010 @ 01:15:34 PM AEST
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WOW! I know many times this descibes my life. Wishing you the best.
Deadwriter
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Re: Breathless
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th March 2010 @ 06:02:12 PM AEST
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So much depth and meaning in so few lines. This was a splendid haiku, though brutal to those who've known its curse. Wonderful post.
Seléne ~ |
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Re: Breathless
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 21st March 2010 @ 02:42:08 PM AEST
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many of us experience this, great way to put it...
take care
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Re: Breathless
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by windowguy on
Monday, 19th April 2010 @ 09:34:21 AM AEST
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Sums up the fast-paced life we lead.
The message is clear. |
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