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Footprints
Contributed by
daylynn_van_wyk
on
Friday, 19th March 2010 @ 12:56:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My rigid heart
kept by dry sandy shores,
the waves grow younger
until a still faded pause.
Foriegn beats soon ripple along
the distant aquarium lands,
A mysterious love pulsates
through the tainted sands.
The infinite sea awakes
as do sandy hearts
love courses within grains
mending shallow lonely parts.
A wave ages in time
serinading once dried shores,
footprints find a new home
within miniature ocean floors.
Footprints rest gracefully
beneath mellow ocean lakes,
the sands become loving
immune to all heartbreaks.
Copyright ©
daylynn_van_wyk
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2010-03-19 00:56:28]
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Re: Footprints
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th March 2010 @ 01:46:47 AM AEST
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There was a certain kind of peacefulness with this one but then when I read the last couple of lines I wasn't sure I understood it. That doesn't mean it's bad...just means I'm not so bright at times. I liked it.
Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim
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Re: Footprints
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by Auston on
Sunday, 21st March 2010 @ 07:12:38 PM AEST
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This piece was much enjoyed, great job.
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