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13 over
Contributed by
Anonymous13
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Thursday, 18th March 2010 @ 12:11:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i feel the asphault beneath my ripped skin
i feel the agony sweep through my bones
not from the physical pain, but from the pain of
lacked knowledge,
i see the lights from above and beside
i dont see her blue eyes
i scream her name as loud as i can but i hear no response.
i try not to lose hope, but i have none to lose.
i feel warmth come across my forearm
i see her hand in mine, her eyes meet mine.
our eyes dont leave eachothers for the rest of my life.
though a seatbelt would have saved me, her eyes did much more.
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2010-03-18 12:11:38]
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Re: 13 over
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 19th March 2010 @ 09:39:56 AM AEST
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It is a good write. As a reader though, I did not get struck with the anguish that these types of writes usually give off.
Deadwriter
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Re: 13 over
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by musicrox13 on
Sunday, 21st March 2010 @ 07:37:36 PM AEST
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this is beautiful...words are weapons...keep writing
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