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Offer Declined
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
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Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 09:20:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Speak your peace;
Spitting words like daggers
Piercing the thin skinned.
Roll your dice:
Making bets like an addict
Battling the odds ignorantly.
State your case;
Serving lies like a politcian
Coveting all hearts and minds---
Except mine,
For I am not for sale.
Copyright ©
JakerBaker88
... [
2010-03-17 21:20:16]
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Re: Offer Declined
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by spud on
Thursday, 18th March 2010 @ 12:22:39 PM AEST
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Hi,
That's telling them!
A lot of anger here - straight from the hip - and a
lot of strength of character from the writer.
Well said.
Tommy
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Re: Offer Declined
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th March 2010 @ 05:29:51 PM AEST
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Teeth showing with intensity this had a knockout line at the end to finish off a well written passage. I enjoyed this.
take care
duff |
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Re: Offer Declined
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by DrcGaimer on
Friday, 19th March 2010 @ 04:06:02 PM AEST
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| I know that's right! You made such a powerful statement with such a short poem. I hate to laugh at the end. Excellent! |
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