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Misspelled

Contributed by net on Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 07:39:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Small, salty and sliding down
These watery graves conclude our desires
How weird it is to see me now reflected
In your pain incarnate, bursting out
And for all I now, we weren’t heading this way
Joy was your reason to get wet
Pure and sticky was the fluid we extracted
Holding us together, keeping us whole
And now the river is clouded all over
All the dead wishes floating above
Suffocating in this mess we call our home
With thorns of our roses tormenting us

Cold, bubbly and refreshing my insides
Hosing down my throat with this last beer
Melting faces in mid-dream I conquer your love
As the smoke hisses around like a storm cloud
Nicotine fulfills my desire to off myself
I torch them all suck them in and kiss them goodbye
For all I now, it wasn’t meant to be this way
I pictured myself happy and forever with you in bed
Misunderstood phrases brought us to this dead end
Acted out page by page from an old romance
Sound was the script but your acting just stank
For the lines you delivered were all misspelled

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Re: Misspelled (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Thursday, 18th March 2010 @ 12:36:51 PM AEST
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Hi,

Oh yes, I like this. Numerous strong, angry, and
pained words and expressions that carries the
reader step by step to the reason why you used
''Misspelled'' as your title. Clever. Great write.

Tommy

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