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Once is the Word
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
on
Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 08:46:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Close once.
Now, seperate---
Apart.
Warm once.
Now, indifferent---
Cold.
Gentle once.
Now, taciturn---
Rigid.
Loved once.
Now, discarded---
Unknown.
Copyright ©
JakerBaker88
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2010-03-16 20:46:21]
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Re: Once is the Word
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 08:56:51 PM AEST
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A unique style to the write written in sorrow. Emotion without security I admire you putting your heart out there and finding a release for the pain. Sad yet well written.
take care
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Re: Once is the Word
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 09:50:47 PM AEST
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oh, dear poet, you do know pain. That is certain. I love how you wrote this and your word choices were perfect. This is a poem that stabs the heart, no matter who is reading it. I'm sure there isn't a person alive who has not felt these very things. Well done.
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Re: Once is the Word
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by Inchiostro on
Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 02:35:50 AM AEST
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It'll all get better :.( just keep pushing.
Brandon |
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