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~ Casting Petals ~
Contributed by
laststarontheleft
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Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 10:22:55 AM in AEST
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x x x
I give these petals to the breeze
And watch them whisp toward the trees
Up, up they flutter, with perfect grace
I've sent them to seek out a special place
A place where only dreams come true
With fluffy white clouds, and a sky, azure blue
There's a stream with a meadow that Hummingbirds share
Whilst the sweet scent of bluebells, carresses the air
These petals are meant, by just one to be seen
So with graceful descent, ends their quest for a dream
They've travelled so far, from beyond and above
If they fall at your feet, I have found you, my love.......
x x x
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Re: ~ Casting Petals ~
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by Inchiostro on
Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 10:49:20 AM AEST
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Ooooo i just found out two of my best friends got engaged and now i read this?? happy day ohhh happy day!!!!
Thanks so much for the great write!!! |
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Re: ~ Casting Petals ~
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 11:20:56 AM AEST
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| What a lovely picture of petals being blown by the breeze to fall at the feet of a lover and what better imagery than the bluebells,and the scent of new life, beautiful dreamy feel to this xx |
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Re: ~ Casting Petals ~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 11:25:27 AM AEST
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Star, this reminds me of one of my favourite movies. --Practical Magic. The scene where young Sally works a spell and the petals are carried up into the skies by a soft breeze. >
This was exceptionally lovely. As gentle as the petals themselves. I love the potency of your imagery. :)
Seléne ~
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Re: ~ Casting Petals ~
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by longhaircg on
Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 04:50:31 PM AEST
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star; you come shining through on this marvelous work of art, bravo, I LOVED this with all my being, you pulled it out entierly,
Wow beautifully done.
SP |
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Re: ~ Casting Petals ~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 12:23:19 AM AEST
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Magical petals. Awesome.  Such beauty and love. The visual was great!!!!!!!!!
Keep 'em comin', Lisa.
Tim
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Re: ~ Casting Petals ~
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by spud on
Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 07:47:47 AM AEST
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Hi,
I can't help getting the image of you prancing
across the meadows in celebration of the arrival
of Spring! Words paint images, and they're your
words - and well crafted too.
Nice one, dancer!
Tommy (x)
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Re: ~ Casting Petals ~
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by Fuzzy on
Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 11:59:18 AM AEST
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What can i say,it's already been said
so, Just Beautiful
Take care
Fuzzy
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Re: ~ Casting Petals ~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th March 2010 @ 05:40:16 PM AEST
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Stunning imagery at work here and laid down in a gorgeous way leaving all to revel in your words. Delicate magic weaving through each line this a great write and it's wonderful for you to share it.
take care
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Re: ~ Casting Petals ~
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 1st May 2010 @ 09:28:06 AM AEST
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beautifully magical,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: ~ Casting Petals ~
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by UNORTHODOX on
Tuesday, 12th October 2010 @ 01:28:05 PM AEST
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I fell for this piece
it's not often we see that soft vulnerable side of life
It really is a bless to escape the chaos, if only for a while
beautifuly written
-UNORTHODOX |
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