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14 Hours
Contributed by
BrandenW13
on
Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 05:13:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I lie here,
thinking,
breathing slowly.
Try to sleep,
I can't.
You fill my thoughts,
they race,
I can't sleep.
Were will we be,
in 14 hours.
Close my eyes,
I'm still awake.
My chest pounds,
head is swirling.
Thinking about you.
In short time,
I'll see you,
and I can
rest again.
Just 14 hours.
Copyright ©
BrandenW13
... [
2010-03-15 17:13:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: 14 Hours
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 09:44:51 AM AEST (User
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The countdown always seems to last an eternity does it not? But the moments together .. oh those flee as if they were on fire.
The emotion is desperate and you've captured it well.
Seléne ~ |
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