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Troubled
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
on
Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 02:16:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Behaving badly got me nowhere,
In a room I'd rather not been in---
Where the trouble makers go.
Was I wrong for what I did?
At the time,
I felt like what I said was right;
That they deserved what they got,
By making me so distraught.
So I didn't finish my homework,
Cheated on a test,
And this is what I get I guess---
Labled the "troubled" kid,
A name I wish wasn't mine.
I suppose this is what I get,
For being mean and insolent---
This room without a view,
Just me alone ready to start anew.
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JakerBaker88
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2010-03-15 14:16:18]
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Re: Troubled
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by Inchiostro on
Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 09:36:18 PM AEST
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| A child after mine own heart |
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Re: Troubled
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 01:31:46 AM AEST
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| The 'troubled' kid a name I wish wasn't mine,if only the world of adult would realise that the formative years of a child do not show the full adult or their potential,so I don't like labelling, but I do like the security for a child and the chanelling that will enable a child with problems to have a chance in this world, strong poem and challenging about the issues surrounding Labelling. |
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