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Remember Me
Contributed by
harsh
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Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 03:47:56 AM in AEST
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Remember me when I am dead
As it will remind you of all the things that were left unsaid
Remember me whenever you want to cry
As I would always be there to keep your eyelids dry
Remember me when you are withering in pain
As my heart would also be suffering the same
Remember me when your joy becomes gloom
As I will make sure that your happiness blooms
Remember me when you have a rough day
As I will brighten up all the moments that are grey
Remember me when it starts to get dark
As I will be there till the day is stark
Remember me when u say good bye
As then I lay easy and calmly die
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Re: Remember Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 12:12:29 PM AEST
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A strong write with a unique way to let things unfold within. Dark which I can appreciate. Well written.
take care
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Re: Remember Me
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by Inchiostro on
Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 10:16:24 PM AEST
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| Wow lots of power Very good |
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