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All For You
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 11:52:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Pour salt into the wound,
Let it seep until I scream.
Still not through?
Well then, please continue;
Feel free to torture me,
Deconstructing every inch of my body.
Now, take apart the stitches of my heart,
Let that organ bleed anew.
Still not amused?
Alright, I''ll bite;
Feel free to devore me,
Feasting on my aptitude to be abused.
Proceed, apathetically dashing all my hopes,
And cursing all my dreams,
Let them be forgotten like so much garbage----
For I''d do anything for you
Even risk turning black and blue.
Can''t you see?
I love you.
Don''t you love me too?
Copyright ©
JakerBaker88
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2010-03-14 23:52:10]
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Re: All For You
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by sorrowsofabrokenheart on
Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 12:09:50 AM AEST
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| I think most people have been to the place this poem tells of. The ones who haven't have probably been on the other end. It does get better though but in the mean time "reality is a hard lesson learned" .. Nicely written piece of work I enjoyed it. |
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Re: All For You
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by Inchiostro on
Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 12:30:35 AM AEST
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| I know people like that, They are so blind though its hard to help them. |
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Re: All For You
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by DrcGaimer on
Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 04:17:19 PM AEST
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Dude, you got it bad. But I feel you.
Pretty good. |
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