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Certainty of Death
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 06:20:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Certainty of Death
I tried the other day to say my final good-byes
But the words would not form for the tears in my eyes
Knowing full well you would tell me it is not the way
My heart though can not survive another single day
Needing to explain things so you would understand
This decision is mine and will be only on my hands
All options were explored, no stone left unturned
Red flags were raised for help, but no message was returned
Saying farewell is never an easy thing to do
It is a million times harder with someone as special as you
Life gives no promises, the only certainty is death
Let me say “I Love You”, with my final breath
Deadwriter
03/14/2010
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Re: Certainty of Death
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 06:42:28 PM AEST
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Re: Certainty of Death
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by JakerBaker88 on
Saturday, 3rd April 2010 @ 11:40:26 PM AEST
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| The last two lines of your poem said it all, " Life gives no promises, the only certainty is death. Let me say “I Love You”, with my final breath." Indeed life itself rarely goes the way we want it to; in fact, none of what we experience in this world is gaurenteed etc. Beautiful piece here. Thanks for sharing it with the rest of us. |
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