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If i Gave
Contributed by
Fuzzy
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Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 02:25:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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If i gave you a Flower,for every day, i think of you
Then, a garden of love, would bloom ,and flower
If i shed a Tear, for every night,You've been away
Then,a river would run,from my heart to your door
If i gave you,a Diamond , for every night, of you
I Dream,you would shine,like the brightest Star
If i gave you,a Tune, for every time ,you are in my
Thoughts,Then the Music, would forever play
If i gave, you a Day, for all, that i still long
Then,my Life would, have already gone
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Fuzzy
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2010-03-14 14:25:47]
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Re: If i Gave
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 02:40:23 PM AEST
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.... and another teary eye!
Damn you write from the heart so well x
Emotional - yes, and certainly not without immense warmth & romanticism, simply beautiful........
Luv 'n' hugs
Star x x x |
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Re: If i Gave
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 04:13:22 PM AEST
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Speaking with magic my friend. Words floating on clouds with softness and soul. Delicate and well written.
take care
duff |
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Re: If i Gave
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 04:26:41 PM AEST
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Love it!!! Simply written but really deep..
Jenni |
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Re: If i Gave
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 02:26:09 AM AEST
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| From the heart Paul and absolutely the poet speaking, melts you with each beautiful sentiment,..... Then a river would run from my heart to your door.... |
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