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I want to show you...
Contributed by
m000nika
on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 09:08:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I want to show you
something trully amazing
it`s endless and craving
and hoping and wanting
dreaming screaming
singing and dancing
but silent and still
that`s why you don`t know
about its existance
though I think you should
it lures through my eyes
radiant and burning
right in front of you
touch it
my soul
Copyright ©
m000nika
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2010-03-14 09:08:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I want to show you...
(User Rating: 1 ) by northernlights on
Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 02:35:07 AM AEST (User
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I love the contrast in this between the exciting fervour of the soul and its quiet existence, then the shining of its radiance just inviting you to recognise it and reach out, well written |
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