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You Dazzle Me
Contributed by
laststarontheleft
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Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 08:03:46 AM in AEST
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x x x
If I were a sunset
And you were the sea
Rippling glittered reflections
You dazzle me
Through the crest of a wave
My soft glow you devour
I sink under your spell
And relinquish my power
Great splendour and might
Doth your currents bestow
With magnetic desire
As you ebb, and then flow
You dampen my heat
Raising steam from the fire
Until I must rise
Once again, to inspire
Of all those whom I shine for
My heart takes the sea
Rippling glittered reflections
You dazzle me
x x x
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Re: You Dazzle Me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 08:38:08 AM AEST
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Beautiful imagery. This poem dazzled me. :)
Seléne ~ |
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Re: You Dazzle Me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 10:06:56 AM AEST
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Beautiful imagery about a wonder of the world. Captivating words describing a world undiscovered that holds so many with it's offerings.
"Of all those whom I shine for
My heart takes the sea"
Well written my friend.
take care
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Re: You Dazzle Me
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by Mars on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 10:21:20 AM AEST
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Absolutely splendid! Wonderful, beautiful, majestic...
I really wish it were mine =). It seems all too familiar ... great work!
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Re: You Dazzle Me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 12:10:33 PM AEST
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My oh my,such a tender, beautiful passage
I mean,the poet in you is so potent,
your words flow like magic so purely
this passage was like a long awaited kiss
everything you hoped it to be and more
this is an honorable write,words can't begin to express
how moving this was
a classic instantly with ease
flawless and deeply inspiring
-D.Truth |
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Re: You Dazzle Me
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by Fuzzy on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 02:16:44 PM AEST
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Well,it's been a while, since your last poem
and the was worth the wait, wonderful write
just so lovely.
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: You Dazzle Me
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by deadwriter on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 06:41:14 PM AEST
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Breath-takingly beautiful write. Thank you for sharing this piece.
Deadwriter
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Re: You Dazzle Me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 08:51:46 PM AEST
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Very impressive my dear Lisa. Brilliant imagery and such wonderful feelings invoked by this. Me likes.  This is one of those I could read again and again.
Timmy
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Re: You Dazzle Me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 08:56:20 PM AEST
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P.S. I was so gonna say "dazzling" but Selene beat me to it.
Timmy
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Re: You Dazzle Me
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 02:41:35 AM AEST
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| At last she's writing again! can see that sea glittering in the sunlight of the reflected heart that is the light in your life,beautifully scribed my friend and straight from the heart xxx |
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Re: You Dazzle Me
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by spud on
Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 07:50:48 AM AEST
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Hi,
Who's the lucky man??
A gentle flow with just a hint of passion.
Nicely written.
Tommy
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Re: You Dazzle Me
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by aliopterix on
Wednesday, 7th April 2010 @ 10:46:14 PM AEST
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| I am not worthy!! Beautiful words full of feeling. Thank you for being you - a damn nice person and good poet. Aliopterix (Al).x. |
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Re: You Dazzle Me
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by Recyclebin on
Friday, 21st September 2012 @ 11:33:04 PM AEST
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That dazzled me.... Awesome write
Loved every line. |
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