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Why We Fail
Contributed by
catz77
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Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 04:37:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The skies broke apart
Fell in solid pieces
Tore the ground
around me
Stopped me from reaching
What I thought was mine
But I own not even
The piece of land
Beneath my feet
`~(0_o)~'
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catz77
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2010-03-14 04:37:43]
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Re: Why We Fail
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by TheDevas on
Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 01:45:12 PM AEST
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| You may want to brush up on your poetic skills a little. The timing of the poem is off, and the meaning is a little too obscure. |
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Re: Why We Fail
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by Archie on
Sunday, 10th June 2012 @ 03:29:49 PM AEST
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| I think I get this (I am guessing) What do any of us really own in this life, we can be so unconcerned about what is important. I like this and the timing because a pause sometimes is needed to provoke thought. |
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