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Believe
Contributed by
thistle_and_fern
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Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 12:58:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Im thinking positively,
of all the things Ive done,
Im thinking positively
Of the races never won.
Im changing how I see life
And all the things I do
Im changing how I need things
And starting out anew.
The universe is my oyster
The shell my inner strength
The pearl will be the outcome
Ill go to any length.
Im tired of all the fighting
Im over all the pain
So Im doing what I can do
My life I will regain.
The wind will lift my spirit
The sun will soothe my soul
The rain will wash my teardrops
and help me fill this hole.
The universes my genie
My wish is its command
I will not be held ransom
I will not come to harm.
So Im thinking positively,
Im changing what i do
You can come and join me
Its easier with two.
Climb up to the mountain
Disapointments leave behind
Look into the future
self love is never blind.
Put your trust before you
Believe that it is true
visualise the outcome
And good will come to you.
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Re: Believe
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by Fuzzy on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 03:29:48 AM AEST
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Really enjoyed this,wonderful write.
Take care
Fuzzy
The universe is my oyster
The shell my inner strength
The pearl will be the outcome
Ill go to any length. |
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Re: Believe
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 06:49:56 AM AEST
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Lots of great, positive affirmations in here. Good advice for anyone to follow. Very uplifting. Excellent post!
Seléne ~ |
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Re: Believe
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 01:23:03 PM AEST
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Very nicely done!
And may I say, that last verse was a blinder :)
Great work x
Star x x x |
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Re: Believe
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 03:51:29 AM AEST
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| Hey I'm with you with this positivity and hope, well written |
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Re: Believe
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by JustShifter on
Friday, 19th March 2010 @ 07:16:43 PM AEST
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very true indeed
"..The universe is my oyster "
a great write! |
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Re: Believe
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 9th April 2010 @ 03:38:38 PM AEST
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Well you certainly make it seem easy, perhaps because you are so good at it.
I need to take a leaf out of your book and get to grips with positivity a little more, I know it and yet still manage somehow to sidestep it and fall back into the pit of negative again.
When will I learn !! lol
No wait........think positive........I will learn !!
Steve |
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