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Pepsi Poem
Contributed by
dj88fan
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Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 11:06:39 PM in AEST
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Pepsi
From its delicious taste,
And beautiful logo
I can always enjoy,
A sip of what I love.
Blue can shines likes diamonds,
Sizzles like hamburgers,
On a hot sunny day,
Pepsi solves the problems.
As I finish the can,
I realize it is gone.
Cooler whispers my name,
Another Pepsi waits.
Copyright ©
dj88fan
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2010-03-13 23:06:39]
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Re: Pepsi Poem
(User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 05:06:48 AM AEST
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I read this one for its overall narrative and imagery, which I thoroughly enjoyed. It made me want a soda, so tell your teacher when she is counting the strophes that your poetry is making me thirsty!
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Re: Pepsi Poem
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by dbl0jen on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 03:27:53 PM AEST
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| good cadence. great imagery. from one pepsi fan to another.....good job. |
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Re: Pepsi Poem
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by TheDevas on
Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 01:50:44 PM AEST
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| It has good rhythm, and I really like the imagery, but there's just a little something missing. Maybe throwing in a little rhyme scheme? Not sure. Not a bad poem though. |
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