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Unknown
Contributed by
shane1024
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Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 10:53:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Unknown to love,
Unknown to pain,
As an empty glove,
He wanted fame.
But lost he was in the end.
Only left to mend,
The relentless pain.
Unknown to love,
Unknown to the game.
Unknown to the masses,
Of which he became.
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shane1024
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2010-03-13 22:53:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Unknown
(User Rating: 1 ) by Chamaron on
Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 05:54:12 PM AEST (User
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Really shows the depersonalization of someone lost in the masses, and in general lost in life. I like how your short poems say so much. Well done! |
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