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I suppose he loved me. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 10:51:12 PM in AEST
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LoveRemembered
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I suppose he loved me
in the afternoon. . .
in the subterfuge of winter
hypothetical, in my arms of sorrow
restrained
by being. . . I suppose
he loved me
in the aftermath. . .
of seeing ghosts of love & laughter
of wanting & waiting. . .
amount to feeling as if they'd really existed,
did exist. . . somehow. . .
he loved me
I suppose. . .
into commitment
in a sketch-book, he'd made & placed
so lovingly upon my memory, upon my lap
he'd lain his head, softly
& thought this cradled
forever more the love
that he supposed. . .
I loved him
Copyright ©
elle
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2010-03-13 22:51:12]
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Re: I suppose he loved me. . .
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by thistle_and_fern on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 12:28:29 AM AEST
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| Good words, can relate to this. |
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Re: I suppose he loved me. . .
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by Spike on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 05:00:23 AM AEST
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elle, heartachingly superb.
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Re: I suppose he loved me. . .
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 07:34:53 AM AEST
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there is a beautiful melancholy inside this that is oddly comforting. The many, many thoughts that riddle our emotion and conscience with the after affects, so eloquently bore a hole through our souls. Are we ever to be the same?
beautiful writing, elle.
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Re: I suppose he loved me. . .
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 10:14:58 AM AEST
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Constantly reminded of the past memories of beauty, sorrow and the entire spectrum leaving us with few options to either move forward learning from it all or to consume ourselves with lingering questions. Wisdom and grace fell upon this write.
well written
take care
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Re: I suppose he loved me. . .
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by ming on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 01:57:22 PM AEST
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The truth of love and ALL its mysteries come together here Elle. Love it!
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Re: I suppose he loved me. . .
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 12:27:44 AM AEST
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Much pondering here. Did he? Did she? We can guess but we can never really know what was going on in the other person's mind. We only know what's in our mind.
Does love fade or just it grow weaker. Does it get infected with contempt? Again, more ponderings of the questioning mind.
As always you definitely provoke the thoughts. 
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Re: I suppose he loved me. . .
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 08:27:59 AM AEST
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| I suppose he loved me.......words that convey never ending pain in unanswered questions of Love.All the memories, wondering what they really meant and what they mean now, the summary is open, just as all the other questions, it could be a declaration or a question. beautiful but very sad. |
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