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Think of You
Contributed by
Mars
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Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 09:19:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Who's to think of you?
Why should I be sad?
I gave you every chance to take,
And I was almost had.
Why should I be sorry?
Should I not forget?
Those sleepless nights and tearless cries
Are easy to regret.
You have given nothing.
What should I return?
Perhaps a lesson could be had...
A thing or two I've learned.
The damage you've inflicted...
Those scars can never fade.
Service with a smile and
A debt left unpaid.
Copyright ©
Mars
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2010-03-13 21:19:02]
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Re: Think of You
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 10:08:21 PM AEST
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Scars of love that we wish would fade away yet that wish is never granted leaving us to dwell on matters of the past. I like the imagery used here.
"Service with a smile and
A debt left unpaid'
Well written
take care
duff |
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Re: Think of You
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by Chamaron on
Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 11:29:42 PM AEST
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| "Service with a smile" especially brilliant irony. You've got the right idea here... you're better off without them, but hey "a lesson could be had". Excellent poem. |
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Re: Think of You
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by Fuzzy on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 03:18:12 AM AEST
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Like this, write, very well written
Take care
Fuzzy
The damage you've inflicted...
Those scars can never fade.
Service with a smile and
A debt left unpaid. |
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Re: Think of You
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 08:36:51 AM AEST
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| I can hear the snarling as this is written! alot of anger and alot of pain,but I love what you wrote at the top, nah I've got better things to think about,with that spirit I hope you have moved on. well written |
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Re: Think of You
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by rambo56 on
Friday, 28th May 2010 @ 06:15:02 AM AEST
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| like this poem good write |
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