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Untitled
Contributed by
Shane1024
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Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 09:13:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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This blind ***** I talk,
This stink,
This rot,
All that im not.
All that im not.
Copyright ©
Shane1024
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2010-03-13 21:13:25]
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Re: Untitled
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by Mars on
Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 09:32:27 PM AEST
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The length of the poem makes it challenging to decide what it is, but for me I relate to it with my observations.
I know some intelligent people, wonderful and respectful... but they do often swear. I've nothing against it personally, although I do not prefer it.
Another thing I saw was how sometimes when angry or more importantly disturbed, the person who needs attention and understanding chases others away. They curse at all around them and life, but it's not because they hate them/it. It's more because they are deprived of it, and so choose to showcase their deprivation.
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Re: Untitled
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by Breezy on
Thursday, 29th April 2010 @ 07:11:12 AM AEST
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Oh I loved this! It has a familiarity to it that I adore.
Reminds me of Roger Waters' writing. And I think
the simplicity and brevity of it makes it all the more
powerful. Some get carried away with stanzas and
stanzas of descriptions, that can sometimes tend to
overpower the whole point of the piece. No, this was
very well done.
-- Achelois.
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