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Let It Burn
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
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Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 07:05:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Tasteless music plays
While my fingertips touch the keyboard,
Flicking words from my brain onto a computer screen.
Bitter text forms
While heart beats faster within my chest,
Transforming hurtful thoughts into hurtful verse---
I hope these phrases wound you like bullets.
Let them tear you asunder
While undoing your sense of security,
Demolishing the belief that you never led me on.
Copyright ©
JakerBaker88
... [
2010-03-13 19:05:35]
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Re: Let It Burn
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 07:13:32 PM AEST
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This is fantastic. Being hurt by the opposite for so long one can't help but to want them to feel the same thing. Direct and throwing daggers this is bold and beautiful in imagery to make the point of ones emotions.
"I hope these phrases wound you like bullets.
Let them tear you asunder"
Wonderfully written.
take care
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Re: Let It Burn
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 07:27:12 PM AEST
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ouch!
poetry, verse, text, words ...it can be so cathartic. I especially adore the last line. Like a dagger that wounds the soul. Perfect.
Seléne ~ |
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Re: Let It Burn
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by Mars on
Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 09:50:29 PM AEST
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Great job. Lots of passion in this one... of which kind I cannot be sure.
Hurtful. |
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