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When the Wind Blows
Contributed by
Fuzzy
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Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 02:21:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When the wind blows from the North, sends a memory
within the clouds, that pass, Hold a reminder of the
past, in the Rain that Falls, Lay Tears, of both joy and
pain, Within the Storm, Lives a passion ,Deep in the
eye lives a Love, Within the lightning, Thunders a
passion, In the distance, I see a Rainbow, my Heart
reaches out, for the Rainbows end, to find no love
of Gold, just another Dream, when the Wind blows
~From the North~
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Fuzzy
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2010-03-13 14:21:00]
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Re: When the Wind Blows
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 02:27:45 PM AEST
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I really enjoy the imagery used here. The comparison of emotions with natures elements is so fitting as each offers so many variables and difference just as feelings do. A brewing storm that breathes beauty and grace. Well written.
take care
duff |
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Re: When the Wind Blows
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 04:22:03 PM AEST
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Hey there. An evanescent memory that drifts through the misty winds only to fade like a dream. Beautiful imagery here. There is a content acceptance of melancholy that is simply breathtaking. :)
Seléne ~ |
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Re: When the Wind Blows
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by thistle_and_fern on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 12:33:04 AM AEST
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when the wind blows........good use of words, bring forwrd long lost memories of love, passion that stir "when the wind blows....".
Well written, can imagine the misty cliffs, of the wind whipping through hair and the tears falling. |
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Re: When the Wind Blows
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by SunshineBananas17 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2010 @ 10:09:08 PM AEST
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| I agree. I love the metaphorical imagery and subtle acceptance throughout the poem.(: |
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