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I Can Feel
Contributed by
Mars
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Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 07:12:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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What's the taste of an orange?
What's the sound of the sea?
What makes life a living hell,
And what might set you free?
What is the touch of a hand?
What is the warmth of a kiss?
What distinguishes between
An ordinary bliss.
What is the cool of water?
Who is the morning breeze?
Can you tell me what they are,
Or are they none of these?
Are poems lived or written?
This, I cannot say.
All I know is what I know
I can feel for today.
Copyright ©
Mars
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2010-03-13 07:12:41]
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Re: I Can Feel
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by pumpkinsushi16 on
Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 08:32:03 AM AEST
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| not bad. not quite my style, but I like |
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Re: I Can Feel
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 10:12:27 AM AEST
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What great thought provoking questions. I believe that feeling IS knowing, but knowing isn't always feeling. Knowing what moves a heart doesn't touch it; only feeling does. And in poetry, those two go hand in hand. Knowing what to write will not move your reader; but if the poet feels what he/she writes....truly feels it, the reader will be moved. It's involuntary. But beware, emotion is not enough. The poet can't just have an emotion and expect to convey that without knowing what words will exact the feeling to his/her reader. There is a delicate balance of truth here, but not everyone will get it.
Good post. Wonderfully inciting.
Seléne ~
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Re: I Can Feel
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by Anu on
Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 01:46:58 PM AEST
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Superb Poem.
I loved it..!
I'd just say, some questions are better left un-answered.. :)
Wishes :)
Anu |
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Re: I Can Feel
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by Inchiostro on
Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 02:18:13 PM AEST
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Thats deep man real deep
Are poems lived or written??
i love your lines |
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Re: I Can Feel
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by Mila on
Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 07:04:43 PM AEST
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| Nice....i stopped and thought for a moment for each line. I like your writting. |
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