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we shoulder a burden
Contributed by
full_blur
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Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 04:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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reign in your gallants
send forth your mortals
lend ears to my avalanche
a blustry portal
gather your valiants
give me common people
free those insignicant ants
and topple the steeple
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Re: we shoulder a burden
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by fancyface4898 on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 01:24:41 PM AEST
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| Interesting and a good write |
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Re: we shoulder a burden
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 01:30:17 PM AEST
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this is good, very good. Full_blur, i love your style...so straight and to the point. I look forward to reading more and more.
Lindsey |
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Re: we shoulder a burden
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 03:59:35 AM AEST
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Well I've read thus far down your list of poems
because I feel there's so much there if only I had the key to unlock the "door".
This is not intended as a criticism. Finally I got a glimmer of understanding with this one.
I too am an aetheist. Well let's say I think it is blatantly obvious that "The Creation" preceeded us by billions of years and "gods" only came recently. We invented them, they did not invent us. I think three or four of my first few poems touch on the subject.
Well I'll carry on reading your poems. I like your style. |
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