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Letting you go
Contributed by
mila
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Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 01:23:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I might be able to let go, after all this time. Isn’t this what you wanted? You made me your slave your friend your one only who cared the most. Now live your life without me. Go tell your stories and share your thoughts if you dare with another who won’t judge you and be there for you. Make your decisions freely and don’t wait for another opinion. Try to call someone at anytime when you need to and wait for a respond. See if anyone would run to you when you feel alone. No other will be there for you like I have through sad or happy moments that we shared. Just try to replace me but I guarantee you that you won’t find it. Deep down you know I will always care but please stop hurting me. Your happiness is the most important thing so I’m letting go live your life to the fullest. I will love you forever because never will there be someone like you.
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2010-03-13 01:23:05]
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Re: Letting you go
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by Rykor on
Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 01:38:03 AM AEST
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| Quite touching, but I felt as if I was reading a paragraph rather than a poem. Try formatting your poems a different way. Other than that, it was decent. |
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Re: Letting you go
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by pumpkinsushi16 on
Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 08:36:32 AM AEST
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Get over him
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