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What we used to be
Contributed by
pumpkinsushi16
on
Friday, 12th March 2010 @ 07:14:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I focus
and drift away
Thoughts of you
..they take me away
Painless and free
What we used to be
...and out of these sheets
Off of my bed
I think about you
What I should have said
And all at once I realize that you're completely dead
Consume me, anhedonia.
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2010-03-12 19:14:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: What we used to be
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mars on
Friday, 12th March 2010 @ 08:45:55 PM AEST (User
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Short and sweet. I like how you changed up the rhyme.
...used it as a tool, but didn't let it stand in the way of meaning.
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